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22-25: Enhance placeholder explanation with specific examplesThe placeholder explanation is helpful, but could be more specific to help users.
-// your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. -// please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. +// Replace ${your-version} with your getty version (e.g., "1.0.0") +// Replace ${current-time} with the compilation timestamp (e.g., "20240311-1015")
97-105: Fix command consistency and capitalizationThere are a few issues in this section:
- "mac" should be capitalized as "Mac"
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$prefix for consistency with other commands-$ cd rpc/server/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh +$ cd rpc/server/ && sh assembly/Mac/test.sh // your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. // please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. $ cd target/darwin/rpc_server-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ && sh bin/load_rpc_server.sh start -$ cd rpc/client/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh +$ cd rpc/client/ && sh assembly/Mac/test.sh // your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. // please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. -cd target/darwin/rpc_client-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ && sh bin/load_rpc_client.sh start +$ cd target/darwin/rpc_client-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ && sh bin/load_rpc_client.sh start
134-142: Fix Mac capitalization for consistencySimilar to the previous section, "mac" should be capitalized as "Mac".
-$ cd micro/server/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh +$ cd micro/server/ && sh assembly/Mac/test.sh -$ cd micro/client/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh +$ cd micro/client/ && sh assembly/Mac/test.sh
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[grammar] ~94-~94: Did you mean Apple’s computer “Mac” (= trademark, capitalized)?
Context: ...What's more, if you run this example on mac, the server compile command should be: ...
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Line range hint 22-142: Documentation changes look good overall!
The changes successfully address the command issues by:
- Introducing version and timestamp placeholders for flexibility
- Maintaining consistent structure across all examples
- Providing clear instructions for both Linux and macOS users
The documentation is now more maintainable and easier to follow.
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[grammar] ~94-~94: Did you mean Apple’s computer “Mac” (= trademark, capitalized)?
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22-25: Enhance placeholder documentation with examplesThe placeholder instructions could be more helpful with concrete examples and clearer guidance:
// your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. // please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. +// Example: If getty version is v1.2.3 and compile time is 20240115, use: +// target/linux/echo_server-v1.2.3-20240115-test/Also consider using shell-style variables for consistency:
-echo_server-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ +echo_server-${GETTY_VERSION}-${BUILD_TIME}-test/Also applies to: 31-34
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65-67: Enhance WebSocket JS client documentationThe JavaScript client instructions need more details for proper setup:
-$ cd echo/ws-echo/js-client/ && open index.html in a internet browser(like chrome or ie or firefox etc). +$ cd echo/ws-echo/js-client/ + +# Open index.html in a modern web browser (Chrome, Firefox, Safari, Edge) +# Default WebSocket connection URL: ws://localhost:8090/echo +# Note: Ensure the server is running before connecting the client + +# Troubleshooting: +# - Check browser console (F12) for connection errors +# - Verify server is running and port is accessible +# - Ensure no firewall is blocking WebSocket connections
97-105: Improve platform-specific documentation
- Use proper capitalization for "Mac"
- Consider consolidating platform-specific instructions
-$ cd rpc/server/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh +$ cd rpc/server/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh + +# Platform-specific paths: +# - Linux: target/linux/rpc_server-* +# - macOS: target/darwin/rpc_server-* + +# Choose the appropriate command based on your OS: // your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. // please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. -$ cd target/darwin/rpc_server-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ && sh bin/load_rpc_server.sh start
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1-3: Enhance overall document structureConsider adding these sections to improve documentation usability:
# getty examples ## --- *[getty](https://github.com/alexstocks/getty) code examples* + +## Table of Contents +- [Prerequisites](#prerequisites) +- [Examples](#examples) + - [TCP Echo](#getty-example1-tcp-echo) + - [WebSocket Echo](#getty-example2-ws-echo) + - [RPC](#getty-example3-rpc) + - [Micro](#getty-example4-micro) +- [Troubleshooting](#troubleshooting) + +## Prerequisites +- Go 1.x or higher +- Git +- Make (for building) +- Service registry (for micro example) + +## Troubleshooting +- Common issues and solutions +- How to report bugs +- Where to get help
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[grammar] ~94-~94: Did you mean Apple’s computer “Mac” (= trademark, capitalized)?
Context: ...What's more, if you run this example on mac, the server compile command should be: ...
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Context: ...What's more, if you run this example on mac, the server compile command should be: ...
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| $ cd micro/server/ && sh assembly/linux/test.sh && cd target/linux/micro_server-0.9.2-20180806-1559-test/ && sh bin/load.sh start | ||
| $ cd micro/server/ && sh assembly/linux/test.sh | ||
| // your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. | ||
| // please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. | ||
| $ cd target/linux/micro_server-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ && sh bin/load_micro_server.sh start |
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Add missing micro service configuration details
The micro service example needs additional documentation about service registration and discovery:
This example shows how to build micro client and server to do service registration and service discovery based on rpc.
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+# Prerequisites:
+# - Service registry (e.g., etcd, consul) must be running
+# - Default registry endpoint: localhost:2379
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+# Configuration:
+# - Service name: com.ikurento.user
+# - Default port: 8090
+# - Registry type: etcd
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+# Service Discovery:
+# - Services are automatically registered on startup
+# - Client discovers services through the registry
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| To run the example on linux, start the server: | |
| ```bash | |
| $ cd micro/server/ && sh assembly/linux/test.sh && cd target/linux/micro_server-0.9.2-20180806-1559-test/ && sh bin/load.sh start | |
| $ cd micro/server/ && sh assembly/linux/test.sh | |
| // your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. | |
| // please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. | |
| $ cd target/linux/micro_server-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ && sh bin/load_micro_server.sh start | |
| To run the example on linux, start the server: | |
| ```bash | |
| $ cd micro/server/ && sh assembly/linux/test.sh | |
| // your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. | |
| // please replace your_version and current-time with the real version and time. | |
| $ cd target/linux/micro_server-${your-version}-${current-time}-test/ && sh bin/load_micro_server.sh start | |
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| This example shows how to build micro client and server to do service registration and service discovery based on rpc. | |
| # Prerequisites: | |
| # - Service registry (e.g., etcd, consul) must be running | |
| # - Default registry endpoint: localhost:2379 | |
| # Configuration: | |
| # - Service name: com.ikurento.user | |
| # - Default port: 8090 | |
| # - Registry type: etcd | |
| # Service Discovery: | |
| # - Services are automatically registered on startup | |
| # - Client discovers services through the registry | |
| # - Health checks are performed every 60s |
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| $ cd echo/tcp-echo/client/ && sh assembly/linux/test.sh && cd target/linux/echo_client-0.3.07-20161009-1634-test/ && sh bin/load.sh start | ||
| $ cd echo/tcp-echo/client/ && sh assembly/linux/test.sh | ||
| // your_version is the version of getty, current-time is the time when you compile the code. |
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version is not the getty version, but the version set in version.go(eg:echo/tcp-echo/client/app/version.go), which means your build artifacts version, default is 1.0.0.
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ok, i will change it
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@No-SilverBullet done
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@No-SilverBullet done
Cool, LGTM; @AlexStocks pls check this pr
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22-25: LGTM! Consider enhancing version.go location clarity.The command instructions are now correctly using placeholders. However, to make it even clearer for users, consider adding the specific path to version.go.
-// your_version is the version set in version.go +// your_version is the version set in app/version.go (e.g., echo/tcp-echo/server/app/version.go)Also applies to: 31-34
97-97: Capitalize "Mac" for consistency with Apple branding.For better documentation quality:
-$ cd rpc/server/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh +$ cd rpc/server/ && sh assembly/Mac/test.sh -$ cd rpc/client/ && sh assembly/mac/test.sh +$ cd rpc/client/ && sh assembly/Mac/test.shAlso applies to: 102-102
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[grammar] ~94-~94: Did you mean Apple’s computer “Mac” (= trademark, capitalized)?
Context: ...What's more, if you run this example on mac, the server compile command should be: ...
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Context: ...What's more, if you run this example on mac, the server compile command should be: ...
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47-50: LGTM! Consistent with TCP echo section.
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114-115: Add missing micro service configuration details.
The micro service example would benefit from additional configuration details as suggested in the previous review. This information is crucial for users to successfully run the example.
Let me verify if the configuration details exist elsewhere:
#!/bin/bash
# Search for configuration details in micro example documentation
rg -g '!target/' -g '*.{md,txt}' -i "service.*configuration|registry.*endpoint|service.*discovery" micro/
Fix the cmd that failed to run.
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readme.mdfor running examples, replacing specific version numbers and timestamps with placeholders for improved flexibility.