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Trim inserter help panel copy #17107
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The overall trimming works for me! A couple of questions:
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Yeah, that's a great suggestion. ⭐
Users can hover over any block in the list to get more details. I was reluctant to say "hover" because you can also navigate through blocks using a keyboard, etc. I also wanted to avoid saying something like "at the left" because that may not be helpful to blind/low vision users. I'm not sure of a good solution here.
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Taking in account the noise around that panel (the whole page and UIs), I suggest to even reduce further, which will also simplify localization when/where relevant. New suggestion (Tip) Shortcut: Use slash (/) on your keyboard to quickly add new ones. |
No objections on my end to your further trimming down of the copy, @pablohoneyhoney. One thing I'd like us to keep in mind, though, is the tradeoff between being as concise (and easily translatable) as possible and channeling some feeling of warmth/personality in the product. It's an ongoing effort to keep a balance between these two, and in some places it might be obvious that we should optimize for the former rather than the latter. I'd just be mindful of always erring on the side of concise-and-neutral. (In this example, we lose "welcome to the wonderful world of blocks!" after the first edit, and "all kinds of" and "learn" after the second. Are they absolutely essential? No. Do they add something that the latest edit lacks? I'd say so, yes.) |
Good observation @benhuberman and I agree. Here another one in case it works better |
Thanks, you two! Regarding the extra warmth: I totally agree that we don't want to lose that entirely. But in this context, I think brevity makes a lot of sense — users are going to see this every time they open up the inserter, which could end up being very frequently. When you read the same "warm" message too many times, it becomes a bit empty. 😄 We will have other opportunities to add warmth, like in the NUX experience for instance: #16315 (comment) Anyway, here's how this new text looks in context: I kept the tip text the same as it was before. I think it's important to say "while typing" there, since the Copy-wise, I do think this works, but I also feel like it looks a little... empty? I'm not a fan of adding content or imagery just to fill up space, but I do think that big empty space really draws the eye. I tried out using one of the "blocks" images I created for another context, and while it fills up the space, it also really draws the eye. 😄 Adding the |
Sorry if I misunderstood that, thanks for the context. Food for thought:
Is the tip necessary then? Some paths forward
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Note that we'll have more tips than just this one, and one of the ideas is to rotate them each time the inserter is opened. |
The help text this PR modifies has been removed, so I'm closing this PR. |
This PR does a quick trim of the inserter panel's copy. Three paragraphs is a lot to read, and I think we can say the same thing with less text.
We'll have other opportunities for more in-depth education (#16315 (comment) for instance), but since this text be seen frequently, it makes sense to keep it light.
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