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Address suggestions from Samuel's final proofreading #84

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Apply pretty much all the suggestions from #73 #74 #75 #76 #77 #78 #79 #81 #82 and #83

Since the RGLC is technically over, we're not supposed to make significant changes. Grammar fixes and stylistic adjustments are fine, but deeper changes might indicate that the draft requires more time and a new RGLC. For this reason, the few instances where an alternative was proposed but you explicitly stated that you were also fine with the status quo have not been included here.

A few other changes were not included because they require further discussion.

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Thanks for doing this; you beat me to it. Left some comments for a few edits/questions. I've skipped some of my feedback where I agree that it's fine as is.

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Thanks for reading through everything. I'll take a look tomorrow so I'm fresh, which might also give you time to reply to my new comments.

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Good work. Just a few finishing touches.

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I believe that's everything. Job well done.

@jedisct1 jedisct1 merged commit 55f92c3 into main Jan 7, 2025
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