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feat: ack receiver timestamps #1992

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@sterlingdeng sterlingdeng commented Sep 19, 2024

This PR is the implementation that addresses #1988

Manual E2E Testing/Validation instructions: sterlingdeng#2

Surfaces the TransportParameters to the application
Adds ReceiverTimestamps data structure to the space and expose methods.
This commit processes the inbound ACK frames that contain timestamps.
This commit handles sending frames that contain timestamps
Surfaces timing information to the CC interface.
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djc commented Sep 20, 2024

I don't think a feature makes sense for this, what's the motivation for that? Suggest squashing all of these commits because I don't think they make much sense on their own.

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@djc I suggested using a feature bc it is a draft specification, perhaps we should name the feature after the specification draft-smith-quic-receive-ts https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-smith-quic-receive-ts-00.html

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djc commented Sep 21, 2024

@djc I suggested using a feature bc it is a draft specification, perhaps we should name the feature after the specification draft-smith-quic-receive-ts https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-smith-quic-receive-ts-00.html

I don't think that's a good reason to make it a feature. The current API surface will still become part of our public API, and it just adds a bunch of complexity. We've added draft functionality before, should be fine.

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I can remove the feature flag in a follow up commit. Regarding squashing, my intention for the commits were to keep separate different parts of the PR for review and then squash at the end. If you want me to squash it now, I can do that too.

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djc commented Sep 24, 2024

I can remove the feature flag in a follow up commit. Regarding squashing, my intention for the commits were to keep separate different parts of the PR for review and then squash at the end. If you want me to squash it now, I can do that too.

While we are fans of clean commit histories with atomic commits, I think this falls short of that because the commits are not conceptually independent -- it doesn't make sense to add configuration that doesn't do anything, for example.

@sterlingdeng sterlingdeng force-pushed the sdeng/receiver_timestamps branch from f7bd14c to 3af9df4 Compare September 24, 2024 21:04
@sterlingdeng sterlingdeng changed the title Receiver Timestamps feat: ack receiver timestamps Sep 26, 2024
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Here's a bunch of mostly stylistic feedback.

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@@ -34,6 +34,20 @@ pub trait Controller: Send + Sync {
) {
}

#[allow(unused_variables)]
/// Packet deliveries were confirmed with timestamps information.
fn on_ack_packet(
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Are these actually changes you'd look to make to the on_ack() interface which you're adding a separate method for to keep it semver-compatible?

If so, should this default implementation call self.on_ack()?

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Yea, I did it this way to prevent any breaking changes if there were users of the on_ack method. Yea, I think it makes sense for the default implementation to all self.on_ack, and then we can remove the congestion.on_ack call from on_packet_acked and just have it call congestion.on_ack_packet.

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self.next_pn -= 1;
}

let delta = self.data.get_var().unwrap();
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Why is this safe?

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This follows the same pattern done on AckIter, where unwrap is used.
I think it's considered safe because this is defined in the spec. If the value is expected to be a VARINT based on the spec but it isn't, we wouldn't be able to proceed in processing the packet.
Another option is to change the return type to be a tuple that includes an error.

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I didn't include a SAFETY comment here because the others didn't have them either.

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I think it's considered safe because this is defined in the spec.

What's in the spec doesn't matter. Quinn must not panic just because a peer is non-conformant. That would be a DoS vulnerability.

I imagine this is safe because scan_ack_timestamps_blocks validated the ranges already. If that was the intent, document it, even if we've failed to do so elsewhere.

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receive_timestamps_exponent: config
.ack_timestamp_config
.as_ref()
.map(|cfg| cfg.exponent),

max_recv_timestamps_per_ack: config
.ack_timestamp_config
.as_ref()
.map(|cfg| cfg.max_timestamps_per_ack),

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I think these maybe shouldn't be separate Options, but a tuple wrapped in a single Option?

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In this file, rather than using two individual parameters on the TransportParameters struct, I'm using the AckTimestampConfig and making max_timestamps_per_ack an Option. None signaling that the feature is disabled.
Exponent defaults to 0, which is what the spec states.

It could be worth proposing for the draft that the transport parameters related to this feature are grouped together similar to how PreferredAddress does it.

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It could be worth proposing for the draft that the transport parameters related to this feature are grouped together similar to how PreferredAddress does it.

Yes, that would probably be good.

@sterlingdeng sterlingdeng force-pushed the sdeng/receiver_timestamps branch from c9224f3 to 67af041 Compare October 1, 2024 19:29
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receive_timestamps_exponent: config
.ack_timestamp_config
.as_ref()
.map(|cfg| cfg.exponent),

max_recv_timestamps_per_ack: config
.ack_timestamp_config
.as_ref()
.map(|cfg| cfg.max_timestamps_per_ack),

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In this file, rather than using two individual parameters on the TransportParameters struct, I'm using the AckTimestampConfig and making max_timestamps_per_ack an Option. None signaling that the feature is disabled.
Exponent defaults to 0, which is what the spec states.

It could be worth proposing for the draft that the transport parameters related to this feature are grouped together similar to how PreferredAddress does it.

self.next_pn -= 1;
}

let delta = self.data.get_var().unwrap();
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This follows the same pattern done on AckIter, where unwrap is used.
I think it's considered safe because this is defined in the spec. If the value is expected to be a VARINT based on the spec but it isn't, we wouldn't be able to proceed in processing the packet.
Another option is to change the return type to be a tuple that includes an error.

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@@ -34,6 +34,20 @@ pub trait Controller: Send + Sync {
) {
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#[allow(unused_variables)]
/// Packet deliveries were confirmed with timestamps information.
fn on_ack_packet(
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Yea, I did it this way to prevent any breaking changes if there were users of the on_ack method. Yea, I think it makes sense for the default implementation to all self.on_ack, and then we can remove the congestion.on_ack call from on_packet_acked and just have it call congestion.on_ack_packet.

fn new(largest: u64, basis_instant: Instant, exponent: u64, mut data: &'a [u8]) -> Self {
// We read and throw away the Timestamp Range Count value because
// it was already used to properly slice the data.
let _ = data.get_var().unwrap();
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This unwrap is safe because the data byte slice was sliced using scan_ack_timestamp_blocks, which this get_var() was checked using ?.

self.next_pn -= 1;
}

let delta = self.data.get_var().unwrap();
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I didn't include a SAFETY comment here because the others didn't have them either.

fn new(largest: u64, basis_instant: Instant, exponent: u64, mut data: &'a [u8]) -> Self {
// We read and throw away the Timestamp Range Count value because
// it was already used to properly slice the data.
let _ = data.get_var().unwrap();
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I added a safety comment.

@sterlingdeng sterlingdeng force-pushed the sdeng/receiver_timestamps branch from 4a42bec to fa004c5 Compare October 2, 2024 20:39
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As noted in the issue, please work with the IETF to reserve IDs. To avoid interop problems, public implementations must not use unreserved IDs

Comment on lines +231 to +232
pub fn max_ack_timestamps(&mut self, value: VarInt) -> &mut Self {
self.ack_timestamps_config.max_timestamps_per_ack = Some(value);
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pub fn max_ack_timestamps(&mut self, value: VarInt) -> &mut Self {
self.ack_timestamps_config.max_timestamps_per_ack = Some(value);
pub fn max_ack_timestamps(&mut self, value: Option<VarInt>) -> &mut Self {
self.ack_timestamps_config.max_timestamps_per_ack = value;
  • What happens if someone specifies Some(0)? Document.
  • Is it useful to users for the quantity to be configurable, or should this just be a bool flag? We don't expose configuration for the maximum number of ACK ranges, for example.

.finish()
}
}

/// Parameters for controlling the peer's acknowledgements with receiver timestamps.
#[derive(Clone, Debug, PartialEq, Eq, Copy)]
pub struct AckTimestampsConfig {
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If this is public, then the main config struct should have a single config setter that accepts an Option<AckTimestampsConfig>. If you want setters for individual fields directly on the main struct, then it's confusing for this to be public.

pn: u64,
now: Instant,
sent: Instant,
received: Option<Instant>,
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received should use a type other than Instant to represent that it is not comparable to sent.

@@ -227,6 +229,10 @@ pub struct Connection {
/// no outgoing application data.
app_limited: bool,

// Ack Receive Timestamps
// The timestamp config of the peer.
ack_timestamps_cfg: AckTimestampsConfig,
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Option?

@@ -34,6 +34,21 @@ pub trait Controller: Send + Sync {
) {
}

#[allow(unused_variables)]
/// Packet deliveries were confirmed with timestamps information.
fn on_ack_packet(
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fn on_ack_packet(
fn on_ack_timestamped(

fn default() -> Self {
Self {
packet_number: 0,
timestamp: Instant::now(),
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It's weird for default() to return different values over time. Maybe encode the delta here instead? Or, do we even need a Default impl?

}
if let Some(v) = self.data.back() {
if packet_number <= v.packet_number {
warn!("out of order packets are not supported");
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This will be very noisy on some real networks. It should be trace at most, or omitted entirely.

});
}

pub(crate) fn subtract_below(&mut self, packet_number: u64) {
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Document.

}
}

pub(crate) fn iter(&self) -> impl DoubleEndedIterator<Item = PacketTimestamp> + '_ {
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Document order.

self.ack_timestamps_cfg = params.ack_timestamps_cfg;
if let Some(max) = params.ack_timestamps_cfg.max_timestamps_per_ack {
for space in self.spaces.iter_mut() {
space.pending_acks.set_receiver_timestamp(max.0 as usize);
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Clamp this maximum to a reasonable value to guard against memory exhaustion attacks.

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