editing x710_bridge_vlan.md (#2333)

* replace conjunctions with words
* reword to eliminate passive voice
* simplify a couple of sentences

docs/guides/hardware/x710_bridge_vlan.md

@@ -7,11 +7,9 @@ tags:
   - hardware
 ---
 
-# Enabling VLAN Passthrough on Intel X710-series NICs
-
 ## Introduction
 
-Some servers have Intel X710-series NICs such as the author's Minisforum MS-01 being used as a virtualized firewall. Unfortunately, the stock Rocky Linux driver has a [bug](https://community.intel.com/t5/Ethernet-Products/X710-strips-incoming-vlan-tag-with-SRIOV/m-p/551464) where VLANs aren't being passed through bridge interfaces. This happened to the author's MikroTik CHR virtual machine. Fortunately, it's fixable.
+Some servers have Intel X710-series network interface cards (NICs) such as the author's Minisforum MS-01 used for a virtualized firewall. Unfortunately, the stock Rocky Linux driver has a [bug](https://community.intel.com/t5/Ethernet-Products/X710-strips-incoming-vlan-tag-with-SRIOV/m-p/551464) where VLANs are not passed through the bridge interfaces as expected. This happened to the author's MikroTik CHR virtual machine. Fortunately, it is fixable.
 
 ## Prerequisites and assumptions
 
@@ -21,15 +19,15 @@ The following are the minimum requirements for using this procedure:
 
 ## Installing the Intel-provided NIC drivers
 
-While the stock Rocky Linux driver doesn't pass through VLANs, the Intel-provided driver does. First, navigate to [Intel's driver download page](https://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/download/18026/intel-network-adapter-driver-for-pcie-40-gigabit-ethernet-network-connections-under-linux.html).
+While the stock Rocky Linux driver does not pass through VLANs, the Intel-provided driver does. First, navigate to [Intel's driver download page](https://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/download/18026/intel-network-adapter-driver-for-pcie-40-gigabit-ethernet-network-connections-under-linux.html).
 
 ![Intel's X710 Driver Download Page](../images/intel_x710_drivers.png)
 
-When you're on the above page, download the `i40e_RPM_Files.zip` file and subsequently, unzip it:
+When you are on the above page, download the `i40e_RPM_Files.zip` file and subsequently, `unzip` it:
 
     unzip i40e_RPM_Files.zip
 
-You'll see a bunch of RPM files:
+You will see a bunch of RPM files:
 
     kmod-i40e-2.25.11-1.rhel8u10.src.rpm
     kmod-i40e-2.25.11-1.rhel8u10.x86_64.rpm
@@ -48,11 +46,11 @@ You'll see a bunch of RPM files:
     kmod-i40e-2.25.11-1.rhel9u4.src.rpm
     kmod-i40e-2.25.11-1.rhel9u4.x86_64.rpm
 
-The file to be installed is in the `kmod-i40e-2.25.11-1.rhelXuY.x86_64.rpm` format, where `X` and `Y` are the Rocky Linux major and minor versions respectively. For instance, on the author's Rocky Linux 9.4 server `X` is 9, `Y` is 4 and they will install:
+The file to install is in the `kmod-i40e-2.25.11-1.rhelXuY.x86_64.rpm` format, where `X` and `Y` are the Rocky Linux major and minor versions respectively. For instance, on the author's Rocky Linux 9.4 server `X` is 9, `Y` is 4, so the author's install package was:
 
     sudo dnf install kmod-i40e-2.25.11-1.rhel9u4.x86_64.rpm
 
-When the driver has been installed, the server will need to be rebooted:
+After installing the driver, you will need to reboot the server:
 
     sudo reboot