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06-profiles.md #2372
06-profiles.md #2372
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There are ways to get around this, but it is annoying. This appears to have something to do with changes made to Network Manager that affect `macvlan`. `macvlan` allows you to create many interfaces with different Layer 2 addresses. | ||
There are ways to get around this, but it isn't very pleasant. This appears to have something to do with changes made to Network Manager that affect `macvlan`. `macvlan` allows you to create many interfaces with different Layer 2 addresses. | ||
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"isn't very pleasant" introduces a conjunction, which we do not want. Perhaps "is not very pleasant."
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incus shell rockylinux-test-9 | ||
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Next, lets determine the path to `dhclient`. To do this, because this container is from a minimal image, you will need to first install `which`: | ||
Next, let's determine the path to `dhclient`. To do this, because this container is from a minimal image, you will need first to install `which`: | ||
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My bad on the "lets" BUT, change the conjunction here to "let us"
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Please change out the two conjunctions mentioned. Otherwise, this looks good.
remove conjunctions
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