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Вычитка. 7-animation/1-bezier #446

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@oshliaer oshliaer commented Aug 12, 2019 •
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  • Склонения
  • Упразднение частого использования местоимений
  • Упразднение частого использования предлогов/наречий
  • Нормализация наклонений (первая итерация)
  • Лишние пробелы
  • Слова в кавычках, как слова, употребленные в условном значении (применительно к ситуации или контексту)

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lex111 commented Aug 12, 2019

По мне всё хорошо, но вот это смущает:

дать очень быстрый результат «отсутствие пересечения»

Может тире тогда поставить?

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Может тогда отойти от контекста и добавить следующую мысль: "Таким образом, проверка пересечения выпуклых оболочек в первую очередь может дать быстрый ответ на вопрос о наличии пересечения." ?

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lex111 commented Aug 12, 2019

По-моему, это вообще идеально!

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/done

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iliakan commented Aug 13, 2019

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@javascript-translate-bot javascript-translate-bot merged commit 65d3033 into javascript-tutorial:master Aug 13, 2019
@oshliaer oshliaer deleted the patch-proofreading-animation-bezier branch August 13, 2019 15:39
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