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Revision edits #238

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@jaybee84 jaybee84 commented Feb 16, 2023

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Resolves #231 , #232 , #232

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HI All, I have ported all recent edits to GH from the word doc. Please review all changes and check if they address reviewer comments. No need to edit the word doc anymore. I was able to build the docx version locally and will be happy to do the track changes once we have finalized all edits.

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@jaybee84 jaybee84 changed the title JB's edits Revision edits Feb 16, 2023
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@jaclyn-taroni please do your review/edits on this PR

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Returning a comment I had here. I also wanted to ask – @jaybee84 would you be able to summarize how you picked what went into Box 3? I know we discussed using what is in the manuscript to guide what tasks to include. What I'm trying to understand: are the tasks that got picked and where they are referenced in the text are related to citations of specific studies? I.e., if you're referencing diagnostic decision support in the main text – "(Box 3a"), is that because one of the studies cited in that passage fit that bill? Asking to focus my review/edits 😸

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I.e., if you're referencing diagnostic decision support in the main text – "(Box 3a"), is that because one of the studies cited in that passage fit that bill?

@jaclyn-taroni This is exactly the case.

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jaybee84 commented Feb 20, 2023

@jaclyn-taroni I realize now that I responded to only half your comment above:

The main way I arrived at the content of the box was by reviewing the main citations to see what were the major tasks those papers were referring to. Box 3a-d are cited in the sections that had references to papers which intended to do those tasks. Box 3e is the only one which is not referenced in our sections, but I added this due to my prior knowledge about a recent paper in neurofibromatosis which is partially focused on this problem.

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👍🏻 keeping this in mind as I review where the references to Box 3 are inserted and how the tasks are defined (in progress)

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@jaclyn-taroni Thanks! If you get the chance to cut some words, that would be great too. We are currently over the word limit. I am also planning to do word count edit once your PR is in.

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@jaclyn-taroni @allaway our one week extension request was accepted.

@jaclyn-taroni I am hoping to send the updated manuscript to Casey and Justin by Feb 22 (wed) so that they have one week to review before our submission deadline is up. Please let me know if this timeline sounds ok, or if I can help in any way to keep us on track with the timeline :)

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@jaybee84 Do you want to update the LASSO reference I added as a TODO in my branch here? That also extends to anything else that was edited in the Word doc but didn't get added here that I missed.

I am aiming to wrap up my edits today and potentially address #234 (but I think we can all work on #234 in parallel).

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jaybee84 commented Feb 21, 2023

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Do you want to update the LASSO reference I added as a TODO in my branch here?

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That also extends to anything else that was edited in the Word doc but didn't get added here that I missed.

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That also extends to anything else that was edited in the Word doc but didn't get added here that I missed.

@jaclyn-taroni between your edits on #242 and my latest updates I think we have everything covered.

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